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OK it was pretty well done and it was kinda funny, but it was too short and wasn't nearly as good as it could have been. If you added a little more dialouge and made foamy's voice so it could be heard by humans, it would have been great. I am a foamy fan and i can appreciate parody, but i give this one about a C+
Crap
That was pretty crappy. . .
The voice was too fast and pitched too high - difficult to understand.
the storyline was pointless and stupid.
What a waste of your animation skills
Why does a 39 year old waste his time on NG?
not funny
and they way foamy got killed was original, but lame and very predictable, only good thing was how he said what the fuck and the illwillpenis joke at the end.
I gave graphics a 1 cause you ripped them
Flash by Marakaz:
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Flash by Tiberious: -none-
Now that I have your stock response to criticism out of the way, let's get on with it.
I'm a fan of the Neurotically Yours series, but I also like a good parody. Note, however, I said GOOD parody. I dunno why Foamy's voice was so much higher in this one, but you didn't need to lower/slow down the shopkeeper's voice. True, the way you offed Foamy was innovative, and fit the scene, but it's as if that was the whole point of the exercise. It seemed like everything else was a setup to have him flattened by the keg. Your work shows promise, as I could easily see the art being done by Ill Will Press, but for cryiin' out loud, man, work on your plots. Besides, if you really wanted to make it good, you could've.
This movie reeks of effortlessness.
(title in work)
^^Good Points^^
The artwork was reminiscent of illwillpress's work, which I guess you wanted to do. Uhh...quick loading time and not too long.
^^Needs Improving^^
Foamy's voice was a little bit off, and made it hard to hear what he was saying. Too high pitched and too fast for me to hear. Also, the sound effects in general seemed to be off sync at least a little bit.