I gues it was ok
Your message was cliche. I don't want to see such simple plots unless the animation is incredible. Your animation isn't incredible.
Some tips:
When you're doing the fading, and you have a bunch of movie clips, you can distintcly make out between them... make that one movie clip and fade that.
When people are walking, have the decency to use a little fbf, because the tweening legs don't always work (Ie: the bones stick out of their ass.)
The shading was crappy. You drew it, shaded it, then rotated it. Shading is based on the lighting. If the head rotates then the shading will change.