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Reviews for "+Factory+"

wow

i love this song this is now my jam man. 10 out of 10 for me bud keep p teh good work.

WritersBlock responds:

Thanks, man.

Overall great stuff.

Nice 100th submisson!
Contra to what other people are saying, I like the repetivity in this song. It's changing enough to not get boring, but you still have a core rythm you get back to.

WritersBlock responds:

I've tried to be more adventurous in the past but I've felt that nothing truly felt right, turns out, I just needed to bring it back home and refamiliarise myself with the basics to get myself going again.
Cheers.

DISCO DANSEN

NICE TECHNO FEEL!!!! :D 10/10

WritersBlock responds:

UNCE UNCE

Very cool feeling

Great song love the drums like you said it is very aggressive and does in fact feel like you're in some sort of factory love the way this is mixed it feels very professional and smooth.

congrats on 100 submissions.

WritersBlock responds:

Thanks, man. Lol, me, pro?

Alright

I would have prefered to hear something less busy as this for your 100th submission personally, but it was entirely your choice. One problem I am hearing with this submission is that it sounds to be a little too repetitive in parts, which is a shame. But it does sound pretty good which is okay and the length is decent too, the closing part is a nice change from the rest, it just a shame there isn't more change.

No really problems with this from what I can hear other than parts where I think it sounds a little too repetitive, it does come out very well and although sounding a little too loud, it doesn't really seem to sound messy which is good. The opening and ending parts to this are both done very well, so good work.

5/5

<3

= Review Request Club =

WritersBlock responds:

Ah, Little-Rena, I always look forward to your reviews. You made some valid points here, and as I've said about other tracks, I'm considering redoing this, actually SERIOUSLY considering redoing this, and with some comments on drums, repetitiveness, making the progress of a productive factory more apparent, I'm eager to strip this baby down and rebuild it to be ten times better than what it is now.
Thanks. <3