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Reviews for "+Factory+"

Excellent

This was great, and a very nice sub for your 100th. It had alot of variety and some really interesting sounds in there to keep me listening all the way through. I liked the slight pause at 1:25, and i liked the volume of the track itself, nice and loud just how i like it. :P.

However i felt the drums didnt have enough of a presence in it. They should of had a bigger part in the track. Heavier!! >:(
Overall it was wicked, nice work!!

[RRC]

WritersBlock responds:

Thanks. I'm definitely thinking of giving this track the good ol' spit shine and fix up the drums, so we'll see what I can do about that.

...So this is how you make a nuke.

A five word summary,

Explosive
Rough
Intense
Evil

and

Awesome

WritersBlock responds:

A five word response,

Thanks
For
All
The
Fish

Very productive

I can certainly hear how this is an industrial tune, with all the heavy beats going on, as if this tune is set in the middle of a production line, with robots and heavy machines manufacturing things. The only question is what are they making?

I'd consider adding slightly more variation, as the process of manufacturing doesn't have the same components repeated over for the making of one unit. Take us along the production line and show us the product being assembled - different sounding parts of the track will come together to produce this final piece, which sounds different from the sum of all of the parts together, when you can take the beat away completely.

I note that the beat was removed at the end of the track, probably symbolising the end of the manufacturing process, but I would suggest more processes involved in the creation when all is said and done.

[Review Request Club]

WritersBlock responds:

I like your thinking! I could definitely remould the track around a physical, almost story like, theme going through the manufacturing process.
Thanks.

KOOL

I could somhow picture the termanater in the future fight all the droid things. But I like it.

WritersBlock responds:

I haven't seen any Terminator movies but they look action awesome.
Thanks.

FIGHT !

when I listen to this I hear a haevy battle going on.
this is one of the bset things I have heard so keep it up and don't lose

WritersBlock responds:

Thanks.