Reviews for Pink Lemonade valentine

[Kijuki-Magazaki]

eh...

Ok I can really tell why is this is being called Hentai.... One can only assume what happens three minutes later after that french-kiss , and apperant hogging of body. And you may say 'you have perverted minds' but you ARE portraying a french-kiss and it's really heading that direction.

Also, besides of the point of the two characters being lesbians, THEY DO NOT LOOK like adults; it looks like a 13y/o girl french-kissing a 16 year old girl, and that to me, disgusts me (the second half of it). It's portraying animated children almost... egh.. I'll stop there.

Dun get me wrong, I love your style and graphics, but you might want to portray them better and more specifcly next time.

Also specify who the letter is for; I wouldn't send this to a female friend, with me being a guy and her being straight.

There, constructive.

touched responds:

Well, you got a little closer to their actual ages, better than the others, but still several years too low for both of them. It's the style. Believe me, I could name dozens of artists whose styles are far, far more cutesy than mine. You have to learn to understand what things represent in various artists' styles.

If you read my description, you can see that I already *did* specify that this is not for heterosexual guys to send to heterosexual girls (as if it wasn't bloody obvious enough).

And to your first comment, no matter what you may envision happening offscreen, you simply cannot call something "hentai" that contains no sex or nudity.

[VioIet]

o.O

Two purple haired anime waitresses in love. How original. At least the art style was cute.

[Denikkk]

Good...

but a bit too short. But in fact not bad so i'll give u an eight.

[Leigh1259]

-_-

2 girls? meh. not wachen this again.

[MasterGorkin73]

Umm.....

It's......kind of........how do I put this?

LESBIAN!!