nah...
The graphics were pretty good. But the story line wasn't catchy, the sound wasn't too good and the 'to be continued' thing wasn't really that impressive.
But all in all wasn't bad I guess. You'll get better... but I don't see this going too far as it is.
-KhrissyShady
*MeOw*
People say things.
I've seen a few people, even those less than impressed with this submission, crediting it for it's stellar animation. Well... I've come to let you know:
The animation ain't that great.
The confusion here is differenciating between art and animation. The art is pretty damn stellar -- no doubt. The backgrounds are quite nice and the charecters are well composed with a modern Disney flare.
However, as for animation. There wasn't much of which to speak. There's enough to fool the viewer into thinking he saw a well animated film... but, for the record, you didn't. Highly stylized stills and motion tweens ruled the frames here people. A few quick cut fbf's of a hand grabbing or a girl pulling... but no stellar animation to speak of.
Besides that, of coarse, the lack of truely interesting charecters or plot takes this submission down off the mantle. Maybe it's going somewhere -- but I doubt it. Honestly, this looks like a prize piece for the authors to throw around to prospective job offers. Little more.
And that, my friends, is how 9+9+8 = 7.
zzzz.....(wakes up)
It was good animation, but a very boring story.
Add a freakin skip button to the credits please!
It has a lot of potential. but before it can take off into its own right I'd recommend you clean up the voices a bit as they do a LOT to influence one's perception of the characters. It was kind of like watching an anime your friend dubbed in his basement(which might not be far off). If you have a friend at a college w/ a school of performing arts you could sneak into a studio to get a cleaner recording or you could get some software to take th static out of the voices.
Very nice
That's some damn sexy animation, probably some of the best I've seen. They voices need some work though, they are very flat. And the story in this chapter, although it seems like the start of something exciting, didn't really have much to it at all, that is, nothing really happened. Other than that, it's some fine work. well done.