The music is quite good
how ever you need to work on your animations a bit, the hero's arms were much too long. he kinda looked like a messed up cross bettween a monkey and a marine! But being that this is your first animation, i'm cutting you some slack. Keep practicing and putting more stuff out there. Im time you've got the pontential to be one of the best.
Peace!!!
Dragon
lol. yeah i noticed the thing with the arms too but i did too much of the animation to really change it. like i told the other reviewees i want to work a little more on the drawings in the future. thanks for the review.
well
im not the kind of person that likes to be harsh but dude, it sucked.
i gess the story was ok and you did a good job without swift. a few things. his luck was a little to good you would think that even tererists would't waste a misle on one guy and there would be more people. in the future i would sugest not to try something as 3d without swift. make things (like the granade) faster. and make shure you downsize his luck.
He was supposed to be behind walls when they were shooting at him, but I guess the bad 2Dism just didn't convey that right.
Hard Truth
The plot sucked man...I mean come on...He just happens to find C4...and he doesnt get shot by anyone when clearly...they could have killed his sally @$$. Oh well, I'm not one to discourage people but it's good we actually have people trying out there.
I never said it was GOOD. I mean, I made this in a week after having Flash for a week. Either way, I do think he should have gotten hit. The bad guys just had blank guns. Howbout that. Thanks for the review. I hope you voted no higher than 2 because I think this sucks.
Hmm....
That was the most unrealistic ugly movie I had ever seen.
Two guys with automatic rifles lose to a guy with one damn pistol?!
He jumped out of the tower and landed on the ground unscathed? What is he superman?!
And what was that crappy drawings?!
The guy walked like in that russian dance thing.
I suggest greatly improving your graphics and animation skills as well as your plots before uploading anything more into Newgrounds.
Good guys always have the ability to kick ass. As for your criticism im not offended by it like most people and I will continue to submit my crap, even if i dont get better. i warned in the description that it sucked and that it was my first movie but some people dont listen do they... anyway thanks for the review. i appreciate it.