For Something Made 2 Years Ago, It Ain't Bad!
I liked your concept here, however this flash is limited from its age, graphics standpoint, and lack of dialogue. However, that considered, I am quite impressed that this was your first movie. All it really needs is some Flash 8 and drawing enhancements and it will be up to code, so to speak. Keep on learning and keep on making!
-Mitsubishi-
I'm glad you enjoyed it! I do like to watch this occasionally and see how far I have come with my Flash skills. It is my own personal memento! Thanks for the review!
i was expecting more
when i heard the opening music, i was like finnally something good but then the graphics/animation were horrible. but it is your first toon, and i dont think it will get blammed. you've got potential, good work
sorry about the graphics. that is definently my weak point right now. it took me like 30 minutes to draw just one guy which proves im not that good. i definently plan on doing more work on the graphics in the future. thanks for the review
lol
I know it wasn'tm supposed to be, but the way they walked around was hilarious. But it had a great story and everything.
thanks! im gonna make the animation better in the future. i'm a horrible freehand mouse drawer which is part of the problem. it is hard to make people walk right when their leg doesn't bend. ha ha. thanks for the review again.
The music is quite good
how ever you need to work on your animations a bit, the hero's arms were much too long. he kinda looked like a messed up cross bettween a monkey and a marine! But being that this is your first animation, i'm cutting you some slack. Keep practicing and putting more stuff out there. Im time you've got the pontential to be one of the best.
Peace!!!
Dragon
lol. yeah i noticed the thing with the arms too but i did too much of the animation to really change it. like i told the other reviewees i want to work a little more on the drawings in the future. thanks for the review.
well
im not the kind of person that likes to be harsh but dude, it sucked.
i gess the story was ok and you did a good job without swift. a few things. his luck was a little to good you would think that even tererists would't waste a misle on one guy and there would be more people. in the future i would sugest not to try something as 3d without swift. make things (like the granade) faster. and make shure you downsize his luck.
He was supposed to be behind walls when they were shooting at him, but I guess the bad 2Dism just didn't convey that right.