Well constructed.
I like the effects, but I agree that the synth does take away richness from the music. It seems too raw, not enough depth, but of course, that's to be expected. It's a very catchy tune, and the lyrics are very nice. I like the way the instruments provide a nice base for the vocals to go on, and the other extra sounds thrown in augment all of this. Different from most of the music on the market today. Are any of the instruments actually recorded and synthesized, or is it all artificial, and do you play an instrument? Good job with this piece. You have potential.