Nice
Contrast needs to be a little higher and you might darken and sharpen the shadows in the clothing folds
PS:
disregard WackyAnimation's review. He has never written one with any substance for the art portal
Reviews for "It's a Sweater"
Looks odd...
The neck, to me, is just a bit odd looking. Also, the line near the stomach looks as if it were an inward curve. Still awesome, though.
Nice and simple
You have a nice drawing here and an even better story to go along with it your sketch and line work are absolutely beautiful I do however think you need to ad some background scene maybe a city backdrop or trees. And also adding color wouldn't hurt either but regardless you have some strong talent and hope to see much more of your work soon
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround and some color
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Nice I guess
The picture simply being pencil drawn and shaded looks alright to me anyways. I hope you remake the picture and add color to it, since color seems to add life to everything even though this drawing already seems to feel alive sort of. The story gives the picture a nice backing as well.
Nice piece of art anyways.