1 for effort
I guess it could've been funny if you would've put more effort into this crap you know, just watchin Kermit's face is funny but not funny try harder next time.
Reviews for "F-day"
Spoony-McSpoon responds:
Oh hello again. Rather than read your review (which actually wasting your time), I'm going to save my time and give you more erotic literature:
After a quick vaginal spell for hermione and 8 years in azkaban for hagrid, hermione was back at hogwarts doing the usual. Today for quidditch it was hufflepuff against griffindore. As always hermione and ron were both cheering for harry throughout the whole game. She always thought harry was so sexy riding that stick and handling those balls. It reminded her of the one and only night. The night harry stole her virginity. She can remember everything so perfectly, as if it happend last night. She dozed off in what looked like a slight daze as if she was confused and out of nowhere she got hit in the stomach with a bludger. Hooch called the game off. Quickley harry flew over and landed in the balcony everyone cleared the way and there was only hermione on the ground all bloodied up from the impact. She was takin to the hospital wing by the dumbledore (not the dead one) very quickly.
that night in recovery it was only her harry and ron. Ron went to go do homework for lupin in the dorms. harry was left alone with her. Seeing her body there reminded him of the night. the night when all evil was put to rest, the night he felt like he was reborn again, the night when he busted his load so much in her mouth that she started gagging...the night. quickly he couldnt resist himself he slowy unbuttend her robe and reached down her gold and red griffendore skirt there it was, the sky-blue thong. the minute he tried to just touch her pussy she regained conciousness. To a suprise she woke up thinking that it was hagrid, but it was harry. She gave him somewhat of a smile. he smiled back. harry asked her if she was ok. "now that your with me i am". He was so happy that she was alright that he kissed her. She saw that see was still undone from harry curiosity, so he started buttening her back up, but she stoped him. "as you were", she exlaimed. Harry was somewhat surprised but he continued.....IM STILL WORKING ON THE REST OF THE STORY. SRY
Since its your second review, have two!
But he seemed to be satisfied with me at last, and he motioned for me to come forward. He did not touch me, but kept his hands upon his knees as I knelt between his legs and did his bidding, parting his clothing and taking his manhood into my mouth, sucking and stroking him until he was hard, and he said softly, "Enough…"
I stood up, as he did, and he took my shoulders in his hands and turned me round, and had me climb upon the bed where I waited, on my hands and knees at the edge of it. He lifted up my dress and folded it back along my waist, then felt between my legs to see if I was ready for him, and found I was.
Standing behind me, he entered me slowly. His member was as large as any I have known and he said, "Am I hurting you?" I told him no and he said, "You must tell me if I do."
When he was fully in he paused, and I heard him sigh; then he rocked into me, fluidly, very smoothly, holding my hips lightly in his hands to pull me back to him, and with small circular movements of his pelvis he stroked himself in a constant rhythm, deeply in and out. Before too long I heard him draw breath heavily, and he moaned as he reached his climax and came inside me.
After a moment he withdrew, and helped me off the bed. He turned to reach for his goblet and he took it and sank back down again upon his chair. He said quietly, "Thank you, Freya. Cicero will take you back now."
lol
omg the guy before me must be really horny and you disappointed him lol. (PS: the 10 in Violence is for that, what that guy want to do with you)^^
Spoony-McSpoon responds:
Pretty much. There's life Jim, but not as we know it.
Well
due recent things that happenend in the NG world, you should bring the great flash back you made.
Spoony-McSpoon responds:
I'm searching for the orginal file but I'm not having much luck finding it :(
I hope someone else still has it...
Thanks for reviewing anyhow!
O_O
F-Day??? Foamy's time is comming???
*growls*
I must alert my fellow Card Cult Union Members!
Spoony-McSpoon responds:
That was ages ago now, I mean ages ago! It was the 19th of December 2003. The UCFD (organization which planned F-day) broke up a few weeks after F-day.
Thanks for the review though!
Pro F-day
Let the war begin. All proceeds goto the UCFD
Spoony-McSpoon responds:
hmmmm Pancakes
Thanks for the review!