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Reviews for "HeavenhelI {Goth Rock}"

not bad

is good

Like this very much!

puts pictures in mi head.

hm...

im not in to goth and im not goth.emo but this song is actuly how do i put this ok.

Lorens4444 responds:

Im not goth or emo either. :) But i'm doing goth music because I like that stile. Right now i'm trying my skills in simphony metal.
P.S: goth and emo is not the same thing.

Err....

Are you sure thats you on guitar? Because it sounds A LOT like the guitar midi in FL Studio...
Other than that, i liked the composition, i would use different sounds though so that the melody would come out, and perhaps alternate instruments with respect to the melody.
The drums are ok, they do the job.
It does get a little repetitive which leads to some "boring" moments.

It has a lot of potential, so keep working on it.

~WOLF~

Lorens4444 responds:

One part is is guitar midi, but other part is me on guitar. :)
I know this sounds are not so different, but i hadn't sounds other then FL has. :)
Thanks for the review and advices. I'm realy glad you took your time and wrote it.

wokwokwok

plusses :

- nice sounds
- good choice of instruments
- uncomplicated

minusses :

- too repetitive for a 3min23sec piece.

- not really memorable, as it posses no melody, just the accompaniement. Ask someone to write a text and sing. Or think up an instrumental melody to top everything off.

- CHANGE THE F***ING GUITAR SOUND, it's bad beyond words, maybe you should even remove the Guitar part entirely, or replace it with something else.

Or, how about you let me record that part? I would gladly do that. Just contact me.

- VoD