This would have been great if...
You left out the otaku fag crap. That, and whoever did that chicks voice. Honestly, you did a pretty damned good looking flash, and made it look sorta like Anime, but all to bash it? That's seems like an awful lot of work to go to to bash a genre of animation. And, worse, you had to use that gay voice for the chick. What, mr. I'm Not Gay Because I Don't Like Anime can't get a girl friend to do the voice? Gee, I wonder why... *sigh*, such a waste of talent on such a moronic individual. As someone much smarter than you once said, "Eat shit and die!"