your drawing style is amazing
your drawing style is truly great, This cartoon has a simple yet complicated look to it. But its just to short!!!
Reviews for "Highschool Shorts #2"
Tovi responds:
This episode was about a minute in total. So yeah, that is kindof short. I already did epside #3, and that's about a minute aswell. The one I'm doing right now is going to be about 3 minutes, maybe even longer. Will that be long enough?
Thank you for your review though :)
need more/ good stuff
kind of like college university. Keep it up.
Tovi responds:
College University is probably way better, but I'm trying to get to that level eventually. :)
Had potential
It just didn't go far enough. As a high school student, I am well aware that my school, your school, and perhaps all schools, are a goldmine for comedy. Next time, take it and run with it. You got what it takes.
Meh
"Please review. But only constructive reviews please. If "iT suck0r", then tell my what I can do to improve."
How about a unconstructive review?
iT suck0r
(It really did too!)
Tovi responds:
How about... not?
Seriously, I don't care if you don't like my cartoons, but you could at least tell me why. That's just plain decency.
Just Put it all..
Don't do little one joke things, it makes it feel like a waste of time...put a couple of these together, then you might have something
I see potential...ACT ON IT
Tovi responds:
I'll see what I can do. At the moment I don't really feel like doing really long episodes, but I might do eventually.
I just need more practice with flash that's all. Alot of layers can get confusing quick.