Hahaha!
That was very cool. Great for your first. Short movie, but it was good anyway. Graphics were pretty good. So was the animation. I liked it. Excellent work. Keep it up! I would like to see more of these shorts.
-TheSquirrelyOne
Reviews for "Highschool Shorts #2"
Tovi responds:
I thank you :)
I like it.
You should really put some effort into making this longer.. you could get a few fans, if you had a full lenght 6-10 minutes episode. Character development!
Tovi responds:
Character development... Good point. I'll have to work on that. Too bad I just read this review after uploading another a new version of HS. I'll think about it in the future :)
not bad!
i like your art, its pretty well drawn. also your humor is obviously there, just make something longer! well done. maybe a few touch ups here and there, but it was very good (especially if ur starting, no sure if u are). haha flessshhhh brraaiinns. nice
Tovi responds:
Thank you :)
And yes, I'm just starting with flash.
Not bad
that was quite good, lol, flesh eatin zombie, few tips
1. tune up ur graphics, use the line tool, and tweak it with the mouse, not the paintbrush tool, it makes it look a bit kakky
2. try to make it clear where the characters r, i thought they were in a canteen at first
3. well i dnt have another tip lol.. the music was gd, fit well with the movie
if ur guna make another 1, use my tips
good job, not bad for ur first
Tovi responds:
I'll try your line tool suggestion, but I'm kindof attached to these type of graphics, where the graphics are not symmetrical or perfect, but rough.
I don't really like drawing backgrounds, so I can imagine that caused some confusion. I'll try to work on that too.
Oh and, I made the music myself believe it or not :)
Thanks. Nice review :)
your drawing style is amazing
your drawing style is truly great, This cartoon has a simple yet complicated look to it. But its just to short!!!
Tovi responds:
This episode was about a minute in total. So yeah, that is kindof short. I already did epside #3, and that's about a minute aswell. The one I'm doing right now is going to be about 3 minutes, maybe even longer. Will that be long enough?
Thank you for your review though :)