Neat anime...
Good and fluid graphics is what I liked with this. Also very detailed, which I liked. Music was good.
Bad with the cartoon Is that It's too short, no real story acctually devolops, and I really feels like some sort of intro or preview.
Reviews for "Alpha1-2"
maxmao2002 responds:
i guess if u combine 1-1 and 1-2 there's a fuzzy set-up
but yeah overall it's an intro
not bad
pretty good, all i could say is raw talent. you need more practice with flash and you could make some really good flash movies.
cool
nice flick.
A Few Animation Faux Pas
There's a small problem with the way you introduce the main character, May. The movie goes from showing the red-haired guy to showing May's feet. The viewer has no idea that a second person is about to be introduced, and the natural assupmtion is that the pair of feet belong to the one person we've already know is present.
You need to one of two things. Either show a full body shot of the red-head guy so that we can see his pants and shoes. That way when you cut to May the viewers know that it's a second person because the legs look different. The other thing would be to have May's feet walk into the alley. Since the viewer knows the red-head is already in the alley, they immediately understand that this is a second person being introduced.
maxmao2002 responds:
i understand what u r saying.
but let me try to defend myself: first of all the red hair guy turns back so i hope the viewers would follow his glance which leads to another character on his back (which is the feet). secondly the red hair guy's position is pretty much set. it would be strange to picture his feet steping in again. another thing is that we should see the entry of the alley behind may's feet.
maybe i didn't make any of these arguments clear. but thanks or ur comment
Yay
...Well, .. I may not sound all that great because I just got done writing bad reviews, BUT, I do like this, quiet confused, but I like this, I can see you worked hard and very detailed--and I love the music.
Keep practicing and keep it up.
Rock on