Pretty Awesome
Yeah, what the last guy said about the feet walking into the alley would be cool, but I knew it was a new person, so, I dunno..... Great video though, hope to see more with a more indepth story. Loved the ending
Reviews for "Alpha1-2"
A Few Animation Faux Pas
There's a small problem with the way you introduce the main character, May. The movie goes from showing the red-haired guy to showing May's feet. The viewer has no idea that a second person is about to be introduced, and the natural assupmtion is that the pair of feet belong to the one person we've already know is present.
You need to one of two things. Either show a full body shot of the red-head guy so that we can see his pants and shoes. That way when you cut to May the viewers know that it's a second person because the legs look different. The other thing would be to have May's feet walk into the alley. Since the viewer knows the red-head is already in the alley, they immediately understand that this is a second person being introduced.
maxmao2002 responds:
i understand what u r saying.
but let me try to defend myself: first of all the red hair guy turns back so i hope the viewers would follow his glance which leads to another character on his back (which is the feet). secondly the red hair guy's position is pretty much set. it would be strange to picture his feet steping in again. another thing is that we should see the entry of the alley behind may's feet.
maybe i didn't make any of these arguments clear. but thanks or ur comment
all this stuff
gets redundant after a while, but its still hot to watch.
nice artwork. nice style.
wonder what else the tale holds.
maxmao2002 responds:
thanks.
though i will probably move on to something new
wow
That was really nice, great animation there, and I really have to say I found the music to be great, You prove to have talent and you put it where it counts, keep it up.
maxmao2002 responds:
thanks, the music helps alot
not bad
but, you must improove your animation quality, backgrounds and... Make your movies a little longer.
maxmao2002 responds:
yeah.
but to me doing bg is never exciting.