I'm not sure what to say.
This simply something I can not grade because it didn't really make me laugh much (I did like the penguin though). It might be it's type of comedy I dont like. It's like the Die hard/seinfield of Newgrounds.
I really tried my best to enjoy it fully and I do see you put alot of time into it and I commend you of it.
It just did not make me laugh at all very much.
Though I will say this, It's alot better than some stuff I've seen on newgrounds, It's just not my kind of comedy im sorry.