beautiful...
...I tip my hat to you for creating one of the most beautiful songs I have ever heard.
I think of a fallen soldier who is dying and thinking back on his sad life. Everything bad that has ever happened is flashing through his mind. All the hate, the blind fury, that caused him to join the fight. He knew he would lose in the end, but this is a fight he has to fight despite the fact that winning is not an option... he fights this fight for one thing... to love and be loved in return.
Very nice scenario. It relates very well to the sound of the song. I can see it as well. While struggling to fend off a few enemies he gets shot in the back by a stray arrow (or bullet depending on the the time period) and all he can do is sit there and die slowly with his thoughts and regrets.
Thank you for your compliments and thanks for checking out my final version of the song. Check out kelwynshade's music for even more quality emotionally driven music!
-Jason
KTRECORDS
wow man.
This was absolutely beautiful. I been browsing NG a long time and have never been compelled to sign up or write a review till now. Good job man!
Thanks a lot! Thanks for taking the time to create an account just to review my song. I really appreciate it!
-Jason
KTRECORDS
Desperate Times, Changes Times
I see a successful businessman, he is at a party celebrating his company's 20th year in businesss. He is also celebrating his retirement. However looking back on his life he regrets his past. What he did to the innocent people to get to where he is today... he still fears that his past will catch up with him, even though traces of his existence in his past are gone there is still a chance that someone will find out. All he knows is that desperate times called for desperate measures, and with that knowledge he could change time and make his future brighter... but is it truly a spotlight in which he is satisfied with?
I must say this was a beautiful piece, however I don't think it belongs in the Video Game genre, more like the Classical genre. I hope he'll forgive me for this, but this could give MaestroRage a run for his money. I could see the times between past, present, and then back to the present, but what you and others did not realize was that the present in the past-tense is the future. Regret, turmoil, and all for what. Although my message doesn't seem clear in my "scenario" it will set in one's mind upon reading it.
As a critic you have captured my mind today and put it in a place that I was happy to visit, yet sad to visit at the same time. I thank you for putting me through this, but at the same time hate you for it. You have made today a masterful song and I can't wait to hear your next great piece, I can see why you are proud of this.
Sincerely,
The-Great-One
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AWESOME thanks for putting this on ng(and thanks for readi n my reviews)welli expect great things from you9i dont care if my review is "useless"
good job saadest and great
very good sad great the song every thing is right nothing is failed continue a good job =)