Maybe change the lens flares.
They looks too spherical just now.
Try making them just a slightly transparent solid circle, or maybe with an alpha gradient round the very edges.
I have to say though, I'm almost shocked at the score that this - a pointless test - has gotten.
Ah well, folk obviously like it, so you should probably develop it.
Yeah, I rushed the lens flare a little bit, it's just that I was unsure how to make it since I don't usually look into the sun with my telophoto lens camera :P(Eye BBQ >.<)
I already have an idea for it...
It'll seem somewhat like a mix of madness and Yu-gi-oh, Magic, DBZ, (and any other good action things) and maintain 3D animation for the entire movie. I may make a series with episodes and such, a little unsure.
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dont do this again.
ng is for the real thing not tests.
y did you submit this?
it has absoloutly no point.
this is gunna get a grade a blamming...
Cool Graphics
This flash wasn't good. Keep the graphics, make your own story and this will be one excellent flash. The movement was great, but it doesn't suit Madness. Make it your own and you have something good on your hands.
uhh
why did you get such high reviews?? i mean its a bunch of transparent Circles. and then a poorly animated Bg with the guy from madness spinning around..and then? OH it REPEATS itself Good stuff. -0 only because everyone else gave you a freaking 10.. my god. not awful but not good .. its not a movie.. just some form of "animated gif". Try Harder.. a blind monkey coud do this... it would take him a while but he could.
Hey, I wasn't expecting high reviews either, all I wanted was suggestions to improve this animation, hell, I thought it was going to be blammed :P
anyways, I probably will never make the final movie...at least until I feel like doing 100fps movies again(my first movies were 100fps, they take forever to make with a high framerate>.<)
Btw, 3D animating is extremely difficult without the use of a 3D prog, something I don't have.
plus there's the word "TEST" in the name. If I make the 3D movie it'll probably be a daily feature but I have a tendancy to get distracted while animating...19-2000 madness was like that, took me 5 months since I kept getting side-tracked with murderer and my audio...although I always make audio, even with other projects happening..
Some Advice
ok first of all glare from the sun does not go large circle to smaller circle the circles are pretty much random so it may be large-small-smaller-medium-smaller-large and the "madness" guy was too much of a cone with 2-dimensional hands. Madness characters have three-dee hands and that + thing wraps around their head, unlike yours, which looked 2-d. Fix things and try again, the idea is great keep trying.