A little more length.
- Good stuff -
The intro build up was very effective to the song and it certainly made me enjoy the song alot. The way there was constantly going on. It looped rather well because there was both the same ending.
- Bad stuff and improvments -
Although I said the looping was good it was a little too similar.
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Evanescence
This tune takes a while to get going from the piano intorduction, but when the guitars came in, you didn't dissapoint. What I felt that was missing here was the length of the guitar piece and maybe some vocals.
The guitar seems to be the dominant force of the track, when it starts, taking over nicely from the piano. After the guitar and drums stop, the piano sets in again, but it feels like you've dominated the track with the piano, which is essentially overkill.
Still, a very nice track, if only for more guitar playing.
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Can't the guitar, the drums, and the piano just all get along? *shot for bad joke*
I didn't intend to have one instrument dominate the track, rather, set a mood with the piano and finish it off with the guitar.
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Intresting
The opening is very intresting, the slow intro is pretty nice, though quite depressing, that's not a problem. There is in the main bit a constant back beat of something that's quite repetative, drums I think maybe but to me they seem to make it a little hard to listen too. The louder drums in this work though, they are good.
The rest of this is pretty nice too, the ending is done well as is the intro, it's just the repetativness of the drums or something in the background of the main bit that get me. So pretty good overall.
3/5
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Nice composition
I'd love to hear this finished and with a real guitar. The programmed guitar just doesn't fit right with the rest of it. I might also add that I think your snare sounds a little too punchy and too high up in the mix, maybe a bit of reverb and tone that down a bit. The piano is really cool, the delay works great. The melody, for the most part is really good, but there are a couple of parts where it moves a little too unexpectedly, and jumps pitch a little to far too often, and it feel s a little unsettled. But overall, as a WIP, it has a great composition, with a real guitar, and a good final mix, it'll be well worth another listen.
Good job.
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Artificial guitars always suck, unless you spend ours layering and tweeking down, hours that I don't have :P
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Great!
A nice piece of music. Starts of simple and gets better and better as it goes along. A bit jazzy pianoplay. The guitar fits in nicely, but it would be so much better if it sounded less artificial. Keep up the great work!
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