Reviews for Slow Chemical (Kane's Theme)

[Coop]

Good tune, lose the vocals

I was really getting into this tune, until the vocals started up. For me, they completely ruined the track, but don't let this take away from it - I've never been a fan of this type of vocals, as I like to be able to sing along with the tune - something that I'm not capable of with this.

The drums and the guitar are great and I think that you've got some good stuff set up here to go with. The tune was a nice length, which is a great thing about the tune, despite the fact that you didn't write it and it's only a cover version.

[Review Request Club]

Blackdoom13 responds:

I dont know what to dooo.
Should it be deathy or clean?!
I don't know!

[Haggard]

\m/

This song has a lot of potential, but it sounds quite "weak" right now.
There's power missing in nearly any aspect. The guitars and especially the drums sound way too soft. Put more bass in there!

The vocals are all right. They sound as powerful as the whole song should sound. I don't know if this would have been better with clean vocals, but it sounds all right with the growls here.

I like the rhythm and the melody, even though I think you could speed up the whole thing a bit.

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[Cyberdevil]

Great!

Woohoo, love this track, smooth, melodical, with great guitarplay, a constant background beat and good vocals too, though not really my style. With "normal" vocals" this would sound amazing, somewhow the simple beat doesn't sound very deathemetalic, but nevertheless the music is great, overall twisted and rythmical, keep it up!

-cd-

[CapnCrunchDaPimp]

Not Too Bad

The drums were ok, and the guitars were pretty good, although I think you came in too late on that lick. It goes waa waa waa waa instead of waaaa if I'm remembering correctly. The singing is ok, but it would've worked better on clean. Overall, it's alright. A for effort.

[Kiddmeizter]

Hmmm...

I don't want to sound like an Asshole, But here is my honest opinion, Constructive Enough I think:

First, The Singing needs more power in it, It sounds like you are singing a bit quietly, Since then it's easier to get the Specific sound and feel of the singer in the Original, But being Quiet is always bad.

Don't be afraid of making the cover sound totally different from the original,And try to make the singing come rather from the lungs, than the Throat, a raspy singing voice is impossible to fake (Not saying that you were)

You Were also slight off key at times, Watch out for those, they can kill your song.

The Bends at the start sound better if you let them ring all the way through the note.
You also Seriously Need to get better Recording Equipment, For the guitar, The Clarity is just 0.

I couldn't hear the bass (if there was any) so no Being a dick on that lol.

Overall, Good effort, A bunch of small technical issues removed, and You could get a high score here, You will never Get a 10 on this song, Because I hate the original :'D

Don't be afraid to experiment, and keep pwning.

Blackdoom13 responds:

Thanks for all the advice. I may go back and redo the vocals. Since im a horrible clean singer, I may go back and do it deathy or something.
On the clearity there isnt much I can do about it. Im poor :P
What did you mean "off key a bit" in the singing or the guitars?
Other than that thanks for the help.