Reviews for Slow Chemical (Kane's Theme)

[Little-Rena]

Alright

Well the intro to this is pretty good I have to say, but the vocals could do with a bit of work, I mean the lyrics aren't too clear but they do almost work with the song, maybe work on the vocals to try and get them to fit in, maybe an echo or something, I'm not to sure since I've never done anything like this.

The whole back beat is good and the tune itself is good too, really fits well together and everything. Not really something I would listen to, not my type of music but it doesn't sound to bad. Good use of time too, just work on the vocals, ending is pretty decent too.

3/5

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[Shanus]

Alright

I had one major problem with this song, I am actually into quite heavy music, but this just seemed to slow I don't know why. When I first heard the riff and the drums I though the voice would be completely different. Needs a little work. But that;s all that I felt was wrong with it.

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[Suspended-3rd-Chord]

sludge

not my style, but the track isn't all that bad...I mean the sound quality like others stated below is lacking and it does kill the track somewhat. Your guitar tones are too fuzzy, but I kinda like the fuzziness, but it could be sculpted a bit better through better equalizations and maybe a better amp model. a nice phasing effect would be good on them too. I would certainly put some reverb and make sure your tone knob is all the way up for the leads, and try using the bridge pickups if you're not too get a sharper tone. Maybe add some bass here too if you can.

Drums are well done- they sound authentic and hold a great beat. Nothing expected less from Bad Man ;)

Vocals are really not that bad. i've heard the metalish vocals butchered much worse than this. it sounds like you're executing them well enough, but could use more articulation to hear more clearly here what you're saying but I can never understand people's words who sing like this usually, anyways. Just stand a foot or two away from the mic when you sing into it maybe, and definetly add some reverb to your vocals. some slow flanger would be evil during some parts too. oh yes, backing vocals and harmonization would be great too. Sorry for suggesting so much. All I know is that it lacks cowbell, er, I mean- some BREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEing.

Composition is alright- a bit generic and predictabale power chords and simple bends. To me, it just wasn't that interesting. You could add on more to the original song yourself. I would definetly love to hear a shredding, tapping solo to this somewhere in the track, that of course starts off relatively slow. and during the end, it wouldnt be a bad idea to add a ballad guitar dealy with a thick, reverbed, chorusy and clean guitar riff on top of the sustained guitar note.

all in all, keep rocking out man. keep working at polishing your sound and practicing your skills (not that I can hear any highly noticeable errors in the playing though)

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[WritersBlock]

I don't really like that vocal style

It lacks melody. It lacks clarity, I didn't understand any of the lyrics. It was played pretty well, although compared to some of the other metalheads on newgrounds, it isn't anything spectacular, I think the guitar is over-distorted, even for the genre. The lead should be a lot clearer. It was pretty repetitve, it really could have used a thrashing solo, which usually livens up a metal song and vamps it up into kickass mode. But on the whole, I've got to give it to you for using a real instrument, it's much harder to perform the guitar perfectly than it is to make a digital recording. Keep it up, on the whole, it was decent.

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[NintendoMadness]

Heavy Metal's not really my style...

- Good stuff -
The voice sounded really funny and I laughed alot.

- Bad stuff and improvments -
You could improve alot with the guitar by making it more heavy because it didn'th ave enough of that slighty mental fell, whihc I think metal is menat to do. (?)
THere was some grunting in there whihc I thought was pretty unessacry. It all felt a bit too slow because the ending was way too long, you need to cut it off about 2 seconds if you don't want the song to be a loop.

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Blackdoom13 responds:

I did'nt understand a word you just said.