Where were you going with this?
OK, first off, a preface to potential reviewers: STOP RUINING THE FUCKING ENDING IN YOUR REVIEWS! I loaded up this page, and I get the pleasure of seeing a review that says "Too bad for ___________, he was the best one." Thanks for ruining the movie for me, jackass!
OK, now for the movie. The jokes were great, the action was awesome. You have an amazing way with music; that's a gift, my friend.
The problem is, it's all unfocused. Is this movie straight action? A spoof? I couldn't understand where you were going with it.
God knows the comic moments were great - There's a lot of "special forces save the day" movies here on Newgrounds, and I'm glad that you had the balls to put a different spin on them. And God knows I'm there once you get Part 3 onto the portal - the story that keeps me on the edge of my seat. But I wish you could've set a proper tone for the events to come.