Great Piece, but kind of generic
I must concur with Torkleson on this piece. Granted it is well written, well played, and has a lot of emotion, it sounds like something from a chick flick. Seperate yourself from mainstream emotion man. Write what YOU feel, play what YOU feel. That, in my opinon, is what makes a piece orginal. Nature can be a great inspiration as well. take a look at some photo's of the mountains in Montana. I found those very evoking