Hey dude!
Ite there buddy got ur message so ye thought id chek this baby out :P.
Ok well a deep trance eh? I like the idea. Good burst into the soft intro I like that, nice use of effects through the intro. The occasional big beat keeping the lstener interested is good. Ok so the tune comes in about 00:43 and its nice and funky and that whitle effect or wateva it is is very cool and the sort of wind sound in the background reminds me of being in a forest wen somethin like sarias song off of zelda ocarina of time (nintendo 64 very retro :P) which is quite cool.
So we hav a temporary break with a build up 2 01:39 which I must say you could have made slightly more of, it seems a little to quiet not enough umph (if thats a word lol) but it does keep the calmness i guess.
Ah the intro of a piano, vry gd in trance songs :D really nice effect with the piano there, very gentle it allows you to feel the song.
So the beat comes back but where has the piano gone? I think it would have been better to keep the piano going throughout the last part of the song because it would have fitted really well (or it does in my mind).
So a very good piece here, very trancy which is nice only downsides are the lack of a big beat around 1:39 (which you could have used to continue the rest of the song) and lack of the piano until very late. I admire the use of a piano in a trance song but next time it wud b agd idea to get it in earlier and use it a bit more.
Well thats all the blah youll get from me today :P gd luck with ur songs and if ya message me ill b happy 2 review em :D.
Chandler-J out.