Pretty bad.
This just wasn't that good. There were no people in the movie, the 3D things weren't all that spectacular, the music got annoying, there wasn't much of a plot, and your spelling and grammar need work.
Reviews for "The Virus 33FG"
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great...someone else who cant use a dictionary
i hate it it sucks
Caaaake responds:
I Hope I Spelled This Right. You Are Motherfucker!
Need To Sort The Sound Out
you need to sort out the sound loops or just remove them altogether because the stops get VERY annoying, also the plot was very confusing and i can only imagine the 2nd part wont make clear what happened in this part. keep trying though ;)
Tips
SOUND - Learn how to edit loops so they seemlessly blend together. The abrupt stops between loops became very distracting.
PACE - This piece ran very slowly. A good way to pick up the pace is to cut scenes shorter.
PLOT - I understand you wanted to do this entirely with 3D shapes, but without seeing humans reacting to what's going on, any sense of urgency or danger falls flat. I also read there's a part two coming so "don't get confused", but the job of the first part of any series is to establish some sort of idea of what's going on or what's about to happen. If you totally confuse your audience from the start, you most likely won't get them back. Work on writing a clearer script.
I see you put effort into this, but sometimes unfocused effort doesn't amount to much. I wish you luck on clearing up the next installment.
Could use some work.
1. The music loops got annoying quickly.
2. I'm not sure if it was just me but the movie moved slowly.
3. Add a plot.
I think that is about it.