Very annoying....
The music loop was very annoying and this may be 3-D but first try working on a storyline and the spelling could do with a bit of brushing up too =) i'll point out a few things i didn't understand:
1.When it said "kill all life forms" what kind of a computer says "oh no!"?
2.The thing ( i assume it was a robot) turned around and then 3 spinning cyilinders just come up on a black screen and then nothings there....?
3.WS? World security? you'll need to sort that out a bit i don't think that even exists.
4.As i said,please sort out that music looping it hurts my ears =(