Incredible work, as usual.
This song is amazing, and your work is, in general, is some of the best in the Portal. Still though there are a few things that can be improved upon. When it gets to the chorus, the midrange seems to get lost. I'd recommend lowering the drums, taking some of the bass out of the piano with an EQ (only on choruses), and bringing up the guitar and vocals. Also I felt that the backup vocals could be a bit tighter performance-wise, as the words get a bit rubbery. As for song writing, I think the arrangement of the instruments far surpasses even professional records. But the song seemed to lack a memorable hook. Also, you seem to cut off the end of your songs in post. It would be nice to let the last chord ring out until it decays naturally.
There's the improvements, here's the good stuff. Like I said, the arrangement of the piano and string synth is absolutely breathtaking. I can't stress enough how amazing it is. The vocals are unique and soothing, and work well with the phaser effect you have on them. The overall sound of the song is far above anything else in this portal and well above many mainstream recordings.
Anyway, I've been a fan of yours since the beginning and I'm loving this Pop/Rock side of you. Keep this up and you could get signed to a major label with no problems. I'm looking forward to that day.
-Alex