Ruhun var...sanatç%u0131s%u0131n demektir...
Great work...has the soul...which makes you an artist.
Bay%u0131ld%u0131m :)
Reviews for "_-={An Endless Desert}=-_*Ext*"
keep up the good work
im trying to make a new rpg my first one kinda got messed up but anyways this is perfect for a desert if you could could you make me a song that is calm and kinda joyful (something i could use for a feild) anyways if you can thanks and if you cant no big deal.
Very good!
I envision a seeming hopelessness as someone walks a vast desert, driven mad by lack of food and water. He crosses the dunes aimlessly. Vultures circle as he falls to the ground and starts crawling slowly... He then closes his eyes and waits for the eternity of death, to bear witness God's plenty and to be at peace...
Bewildering, yet have it's own mystery....
For me, like what other people said, the mood for this song is like in a forest instead of desert, but for a good song like this, any place would be okay, with good mood of course.....story again....
(Taking place in a deep forest, there's a small passage in the middle, with high end trees with think foliage covering the sky...)
"What are we going to do, sir?"
"Hold on....we'll wait for them to come.....prepare your bows...."
"Okay sir, we will commence the ambush when you give the signal,"
They were hiding in the tree branches, his soldiers waited with patience for the enemy to come....but something bothers the leader....he was going to attack a big convoy of troops, with his troops, he just have a 1:10 chance of routing the enemy......it was a suicide mission, but for his country, he will do anything for it...
"Arquebusiers, come with me," With just 50 gunmen, they're creeping in the thick leaves besides the passage.....the rest 50 were hiding on top the trees....
"They've come sir...." Whispered his soldier.....
"Fill in your gun, lads...prepare your swords....we're going to battle to our grave,"
"They're coming closer"
"(Taking his position)*Gasp* This is it....father, mother, I maybe...can't see you anymore....goodbye, click....."
The sound of the first gunpowder shots uproaring the masses of troops....the small army manage to kill nearly half of the army but....everything is just out of their hand in the middle of the battle.....
"No sir, you've been surrounded!Aaahhh! (Fall from a tree)"
"What? No.....shit, is this the end?"
"Nifty trick scoundrel! You think you can beat us?"
"Argh....(Filling in his gun)"
"You doesn't want to surrender?"
"Captain!"
"Sir"
Sound of his comrades yelling can be heard in his ears....but he knows, if he die, he will take threesome or more of the enemy with him.
"Nope, *Shots*"
"Attack that bastard!"
"Come on, I didn't afraid of you! (Pulling his sword)"
"Hahahahahaha!!!!
He knows that this is the last....this is the death pact for him for joining the army, although he will die for sure, but his efforts and contribution will always be remembered....forever.
"No.......our captain.........die.....pull back, pull back......."
That were the last words that he can hear before, his connection with the mortal world ended.....with a pact of iron sword protruding into his chest.......
~Fin.......
Gosh, I'm truly in deep trance while hearing your music sir, really....really fantastic. I will look forward to your future songs.
Dune
I liked this alot Maestro, reminds me of Frank Herberts Dune novels. The reverb has the effect of conjuring up dry heat and dust storms in a vast unforgiving desert, with the last minute sounding like a sand storm is building up and threatening to destroy a small nomad village. Keep up the excellent work