not bad
its really not bad at all, beside it being fast it pretty good, keep working on your vids.oooo and its really good for your first flash.if you read these other guys review they might say its bad but they might not know thats its your first flash. btw how do you make vidoes? flashs?
for your efforts and time ill gv you a 9/10
PS: it was a good story, but might want t work on it, and change a little bit of it
nice job