hmm
I think your characters are really lame..but you are great at animating and using flash.
Reviews for "Sumo Man + French Fry ep0"
adam-p89 responds:
Haha thanks, they are! But Sumo Man is hilarious later on...
Cool
Wow, you're proffesional.
adam-p89 responds:
Haha thanks!
Not bad...too much motion blur though.
To be honest the whole thing was really disorienting. It sort of starts out with all these characters suddenly being thrown into a battle, with no explanation behind it and constantly shifting camera angles that become confusing rather quickly. And like I mentioned in the one line summary, the motion blur effect was exploited perhaps too much in this piece. It was also a bit of a sleeper, as it was mostly devoid of sound and the music was repetitive and didn't fit well. HOWEVER...I do see potential. The visuals are decent (though maybe you should consult that perspective movie on NG so you can draw the buildings with more depth), it was put together surprisingly well and the characters are fairly original. Work on this and I'm sure you'll have something great on your hands.
adam-p89 responds:
Thanks, I'll work on what you've said.
heh
weird. a french fry and a sumo wrestler. i really expected this to suck because series usually suck but this one is pretty kool. good music also
adam-p89 responds:
Thanks, "Smoke weed evr'y day"!
What the hell was that?
I just didn't think much of it. If this was originally a comic, it was probably better off as the comic in the first freakin place! I didn't think much of it because of the fact, there wasn't much to it! What the hell was it about anyway!? I watched it, stared at it, didn't think much of it, and then as I watched it again, I just realized how much dumber it was getting.
The fact that you put Ep. 0 in it, made me think that you were trying to hard. Maybe if you did something like, freeze frame it with little boxes as if it were a motion comic instead, that would be sweet, sure it would be extra work, but still if you made it like a comic book, with the boxes doing the animation and the words there and all, and then you go from box to box with the animation running, much better, rather than this thing which was a french fry and a sumo man (WHO WASN'T EVEN THAT FAT IN THE FIRST PLACE!!!)
Sumo wrestler's should be fat, the fatter, the better.
I use to be a sumo wrestler, than I became a pirate.
adam-p89 responds:
Exactly, when you see the episodes you'll see why he's skinny. He was fat, but he really sucked at sumo wrestling and all the exercise helped him lose a bit of weight. Fighting baddies all the time got rid of the rest. Good luck pirating, and I'll think about your "comic book style" for the episodes though, I was wondering how to do it, good idea! Thanks.