I dont see a future in it
Unless you develop their characters, tell us a bit about them through SPEECH (music in the background isn't always the best option for a flash) and maybe replace some of the characters. Such as french fry. Tell me, looking back, do you think you can come up with many more stories about a french fry and a fat guy? You really have to develop animation a bit more too.
2/5
Sweet
You could defiantly do something with this! I really do like it a lot. You should just work on character development so we know “who” these people are. Are they good or evil? Good work anyways!
Might be nice to see some story.
As far as I know, some fatty people randomly tried to massage a dragon that had inside it a bomb and a blue dragon with their golden glowy body parts. Not that interesting. I came by this piece whilst vote trawling, and to my eyes it was a 2.5 level animation. If you have gotten better then you could be interesting, so be much better. Much, much, better, enough to get on the front page. That'd be good.
Really good.
This was a really nice intro to the characters. All of them were designed and animated very well. I can't wait to see the real series. So you are getting vouce actors? I think you should still use speech bubbles too, just for that "comic book" feel.
Hmm, that's an interesting idea. I'll look into it. Thanks for the review.
Hey, man..
I'm sorry. I really wanted to like this. You are one of the few KICKASS guys that respond to every reveiw.. an inspiration. Also, you give wonderfuly thoughtful reveiws (I looked through your profile). I seem to really like you as a person, but as hard as I tried, I couldn't get anything from your movie. I didn't like the art, I didn't like the storyline, and I hated the music/sound. However, I really liked your logo. That was well done. I hope to read your response soon.
Cheers
Haha thanks man. It was really just something I made for my dad for father's day, and for myself as a tribute to a step in my artistic evolution. The Adventures of Sumo Man and French Fry were 8 comic books I drew that my dad really got a kick out of. So this was mainly made for him, and if anyone else likes it, great, if not, that's alright too. "Different Strokes for Differing Folks" as the Wise Men of Old say. Take care man.