Slaps!? lmao
I hope that bass is self-played since the slaps sound damn nice! (doub it though) Anyways, nice structured song. I surely can imagen a kite going into the air. The child/man holding it, watching it going higher and higher. You captured the feeling for sure. The soundquality was very nice too, very gentle piano tone there. The only thing I didn't like was the synth- or I guess better to say synth sounding guitar. :/
Other than that, good job man! 5up from me!