Aaron McCray - nice graphics, bad plot, bad sound
Ok Arron your visual quality is very good in this animation. Especially the blurred reduced opacity vectory copys you use in some scenes of the characters, gives a nice impression of it being hand drawen rather than purely flash vectors on screen.
However this is really let down by the bad music and voice acting. The main characters voice lacks any passion or feeling. The whole accent and sound of the voice really does not fit in either. If you were aiming for a deadpan sound then you should look elsewhere for your voicetalant.
Plot appears to be nothing original with lack of atmosphere. The whole "soldier conditioned from birth" thing is pretty cliched imo.
Hopefully you can improve the audio in the future of the series and develop the characters so they become more interesting.