"Arrogancy" isn't a word
Pretty art set to animation so slow and dull it looks like we're in slow motion, a horrribly executed intro - full of trite allegorical catch-lines - to what looks to be a boring, cliche plotline... the ultimate cliche Anime cartoon.
You get a 10 in humor for that "voice acting".
geez well..I don't know..
ok ok the graphics were great but dang man what did it all mean? I really think that the person talking sucked...and whateverz i give it a 4 it was good but not great.
This is lame.....
Sorry dude. This is LAME. Your animation skills' ABSOLUTELY COOL BUT your plotline needs a LOT OF work. I'm sorry to say this but it is the LAMEST thing I've ever seen. Every anime cliche is in there that it is UNBEARABLY BORING. Rather SHOW than TELL. By narrating the plotline makes the whole thing tedious and no excitement. Be more subtle and leave more space for suspense and let your audience to work out what's happening rather than TELLING them what's happening.
bleah
i seriously hope that this sucked only cause it was an intro to the series =/
Could be better.
JPhoenix has a point.
Maybe if this came on CN I would watch it, but it has quite a few...shall we say cliched moments in it.
Some parts could better in graphics and plot, especially the part at the end. 'Who are you? Why am I telling you this?!' should've been left out in my oppinion. Kind of...spoiled my interest and made it fall about five points on my scale.
Perhaps it would've been better to simple say 'I'm.... and this is my story', but that too is overused and cliched.
The bird thing was overused as well, and the sword scene could've been much better.
The kiss scene looked...strange. It also could've been much better.
Maybe if a more...talented or expirienced person drew this, worked the graphics, maybe then I would be more interested in watching it.
The plot could use some revision, and the characters themselves look like they could use some work.