Don't get ahead of yourself
This is good, don't get me wrong. This is damn good, but no where near publishable like on Cartoon Network. First off, the voice acting is under par. I mean, this flash was fucking awesome, but if you want to sell this shit, it needs to be unbelievable, and I don't think you've quite gotten to that point. It is possible though, keep working! Maybe it'd be better to sell the idea than your actual work...?
Pretty good..
I love the animation, but what dont I get is why does he look soo young..He looks like a little kid in one of the scenes..I dont have audio on this computer so I could'nt rate the sound for it.Overall the drawingss and some of the animations are great I'll give it a 9 out of 10, great job Aaron..
Very nice animation
Looks promising.
Hmm..
The plot is interesting, and the artwork is incredible, especially when I compare it to some of the other series. I have to wonder how you didn't get tired working on such a long video while keeping the quality from start to finish. My only complaint, the voice acting. It sounds as if the person is just reading the lines from a piece of paper without really putting themselves in the position of the character.
Episode one? There were plenty episodes before this! Maybe it's like "Star Wars". Anyway, this was still quite entertaining. It was interesting to have a love interest featured. A pity she was killed off rather quickly.
You lose points on that. This is basically a backstory episode. I'm glad to be up to date with everything. Well, it's more recap. The music's nice too.