Great artwork, but...
Do you know what the definition of "arrogancy" is? It's setting up an online store and a forum for EPISODE NUMBER FREAKIN ONE of your show!!!!! How the hell do you know that anyone is even going to like it? Especially enough to buy something...
On to the review though...
The subject matter is cliched. You should really try to get off of the whole "grown in a vat and augmented by the government to be an unstoppable killing machine" thing. I've seen that a million-bazillion times. Everyone on Newgrounds has probably seen it a million-bazillion times.
And no, I will not be contacting the Cartoon Network or Tokyopop. The VERY LAST THING we need on TV is MORE ANIME. Especially anime made in the UNITED STATES. I think by now everyone has seen what anime looks, sounds, smells like. Just because you like something DOESN'T MEAN YOU HAVE TO COPY IT. By the way, ANIME IS JAPANESE, AND LAST TIME I CHECKED "MCCRAY" IS NOT A JAPANESE NAME.
THE GOOD PART OF THE REVIEW:
The only thing you have going for you is your artwork and animation. They are superb. Come up with an original idea and you will be a millionaire.