Lmao.. Dead Bird..
This would make a great television series. You should audition somewhere. Good luck if you ever do.
Lmao.. Dead Bird..
This would make a great television series. You should audition somewhere. Good luck if you ever do.
dude...
I can't really compare this to anithing i have ever seen on newgrounds so i give it a 10
Amazing
The best graphics in a Flash that i've ever seen on Newgrounds. Or anywhere else for that matter. Good you've bothered to put in a decent (so far) storyline otherwise it'd ruin it.
I was very dissapointed
After seeing the score you achieved and the previous reviews I read before I watched this Flash got me excited for something that was really going to be good. I'm just going to give a little constructive criticism:
Pro(s): Pretty good Animation and Character drawings.
Con(s): Poor character/narration voice overs, lacks a lot in the storyline, lacks originality and interest.
I don't know if thats your voice doing the narrations but if you want this series to succeed, you need someone with a better voice for the job. I reccomend you don't ever put your, rather that voice on a Flash ever again. I also suggest you get someone else to write your storyline for you, because this one was very weak.
You're a great artist and animator from what it seems but you aren't very good at depicting your own character or creating a theme/story. Better luck on Episode 2, i'll watch out for it. Sorry to be a jackass but i'm just bleeding the truth.
Excellent anime
Wow, looks like an awesome series. Your animation is amazing. A lot of work had to go into this to make something that looks that good. Also, really good story too. Can't wait to see more!