Fear ???
Dude, first this wasn´t scary or something wanna know why?
Cause normally you don´t fear things you see , you fear things you don´t see.
when you walk at night on a field and you hear strange noises near you and you don´t know what it is ,you imagine yourself things that scare you...
well maybe you will fear also at day a lion that comes in your direction ^_^
Needs some sound....
I don't know why you submitted this to NG, but oh well. It needs some sound to even slightly surprise someone, but its still a cartoon, and personally, the only person who you could scare with this would be my 2 year old cousin at 2am. Better luck next time, but do update it.
pretty good stuff
i agree wth the other guy, you need sounds to reall y scare someone, just pout in some classical music or something and then at the nd change it to screaming and shut, overall good, but sound is a must
Work on it
Could have been a waaayy better with sound and maybe better drawing and stuff.. im sure you'll make something great, keep tryin'.
you need sound
usually you need sight and sound to scare someone, try remaking the flash with frightening sounds