Audio has been added; the circle of cinema iz now
KUMPLETE. I told you b4 that this would be flawless once (some decent) sound was affixed to it. The final product pleasez me to the fullest extent possible. I am very eager to see the next installment, whether it be another segment or the conclusion. This film is the disputed stick flick on the portal.
BOTTOM LINE: He just keepz pushing the envelope, folkz.
-Don Cornball
-Founding Member of the UnderDawgz
Sweetness!
Very cool. Extremely well animated (I especially liked those glowing eyed monster things), and a nifty plot to boot. It ends too abruptly, and the sound could have been more consistant, but there were AKIRA references, so that's good for a 5!
DUM DUM DUMDUMMMMM!!!!!!!!
Nice.
Good things:
Graphics
Fighting scenes
Bad things:
Story not very original
The mouth Is moving but he is not talking some times.
Comments: This has got to be the smoothest running thing on NG. (Well, 2nd. XiaoXiao #3 is THE most smoothest.
Superb for a stick movie.
This is one of those rare stick movies which MUST be respected, bacause it's so... just good all around.
Your style continued to amaze me throughout the entire flash. I love your use of the strange focus (the backrounds were always blurry) because it always put all the attention on your characters, instead of a fancy, filler of a backround. As well, the "drone" eyes with the trailers was a wonderful touch. It makes them kind of... mysterious. Like there should be a reason why they're like that. Even if it doesn't, it sets them apart from main characters and lets the viewers know clearly who they are. This is a wonderful technique, since you chose not to show character differences by their stick colour.
The only thing that you need to work on is your audio. Music would have been appropriate in some areas, and sometimes the synching was way off, but it wasn't anything too awful. The mysterious, unseen "Voice" was excellent.
Fantastic job on the the whole thing.
the soundreally ruins it
i've saw it w/o the sound, andi really liked it, but now, the sound adds som, and takes some.
there are times when there is sound, and times when there's no sound, or even worst, when there is sound, and it just suddenly stop.
maybe you should get soumone who's a pro in sound, as you are pro in animation.
even the sounds that are in place are not really good, and all of the voices are not syncronized with the animation.
but other then the sound, it's one of the best movies that i've saw ever! i've really liked the smoke and the lined that came out of the eyes of the freaks.
i really hope that you'll be able to do something with the sound.
i expect to see more greatness from you!