Overall, I love the game because this it my type of game, but I've encountered a few bugs, and the grammar seems to be off so you better fix that. It's just some minor bugs, but overall the game is great. :3

[ZKJ REVIEW] Not bad but needs work.

The first thing I would suggest is an in game title menu with a tutorial for the buttons and action keys and a settings menu in the title screen for audio, graphics etc. .
The second thing I would suggest is a proof reader to correct the grammatical errors. The gameplay and player movement is a bit slow and rough. I would suggest a couple bug fixes and tweaking the game so that it has smoother gameplay and movement.
Cons aside, the pros of this game are quite plentiful as well.
The humor is pretty good and realistic the art and graphics and pretty grade A for this type of game.
I also highly recommend a Newgrounds Medal system as it always improves reviews and it's a good way to give back to the people who play and review your games.

I will give you my full support on this game as long as you take the opportunity to fix what needs fixing and bring this game up to speed.
This game has a lot of potential and I would love to see this game flourish and prosper.

First of all - I don't get how to start the game - I was waiting, clicking, then I got bored, scrolled the reviews and the game somehow started. Then there's the grammar thing - I get tiny mistakes, but this is almost illegible - I am not from naturally english speaking country (as you can even notice) but these are atrocious. You should at least use google translator to erase the biggest ones (for example "extreamly" "where").
Then I had some serious problems getting what's hp, mp, tp and remembering what all the potions do - I know it may be just mine problem, but some small optional help button wouldn't be bad.
I really liked the snake thing - that all the members were walking in snake formation. The story is really cool and delightful, the graphics is nice, controls are easy to get.
I really liked the ending and the fact that it's half adventure and half fighting,

It's an enjoyable game but the grammar is atrocious and it really takes away from the story.

there is a bug, the battle doesn't work because it can't find the image to the background