Reviews for A Christmas Story

[mrskobioshi]

Oh my.

Negative:
The spelling and grammar need a lot of help. I highly suggest that you have someone proofread/edit your story/text before you add it to the game. I see that you made this game in a few weeks. A little extra time for editing would really make this a much better game. Also, there were parts where I just couldn't understand what you were trying to say at all. That kind of drains some of the fun out of the game.

The music could use some variety. It gets annoying after a time. The volume controls do not seem to work, or so it seems, until you load a new area. Perhaps a fix here would be good or a disclaimer letting people know that this is the case.

Positive:
The art is beautiful and super cute. It was funny in some parts. Props for the spunky idea for the "last" boss, it made me smirk.

If you made another game and had someone (or some people) help you with the editing and you made more of an effort with both the story line and added more adventures to the game, I think you would get a 5/5 stars from a lot of people.

I will give you 4 stars though because the amount of spelling and grammar mistakes just really ruined most of the game for me.

I do love the cute anime characters though and I think you have talent. Thank you for your time, effort, and game.

CloudKnight responds:

thank you so much for your well in-depth review!!! i appreciate you taking your time, writing me in such honesty. it is defiantly helpful!

[anibalholcomb]

merry christmas

[FenderXT]

I do hate Christmas, but this set the mode for a real christmas, the thing in the end there the last text part, yee agree about that. :) I did a full playthru video , check it out.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RG_Qpw_K7l4

Was a really nice game, the fight photos was a bit let down though, sorry, all ells was great, well done. Story well done, music was not to bad :)

Only thing, that sad kid that was sick :/ I chuld not help him, I did not know what to do there :( he is still sick. Now I do fell a bit mean... and now I come to think about one more thing :/ I forgot to go get my reward for geting that family back home ;( Matt and Key never got any santas coat :/

So many things I missed, but it was a nice hour :)

CloudKnight responds:

thank you so much i appreciate your well in depth review also im glad this game was able to set you in the mood your review gave me a big boost of motivation to continue along with my next project !!! thanks so much i will watch the play-through now !
il also send a pm about the sick kid :( poor lil guy

[DoctorStrongbad]

An okay game, but the bugs really ruin it.

[thebreadandbutter]

I recommend making your own assets for games, I could tell these were rpg maker and clip art drawings. I also would like to see Jason be more useful from the get go, he comes with no weapon so it was kinda difficult finding a use for him in battle. You should also spell and grammar check your game.
Also the boss fight with the Santa Tick was kinda boring so you should find a way to spice that up a bit.

CloudKnight responds:

thank you for your review i truly appreciate it!!! also about Jason he starts off with no sword because there's an actual chest in town that provides his sword >.< you just gotta explore there's a few other hidden egg's pm me if you want the full details i don't want to spoil it for everyone else :P!