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First flash movie.
First time to make it.
First time to submit it in this here site.
Hope you enjoy.
well it wasn't out of this world. All i can say is good animations. It was very boring after a while though. Try actully picking a more wide ranged subject. Good Effort though. Keep making
It was Good.
very good graphics and ur drawing is sweet, but it IS boring. You can do a really nice looking Flash next time, make a flash that makes sense.
Overall, it was good.
that was good sound would have helped hard to read the poem at times but it was still good i liked it keep up the good work
Not bad, but it would be really good if you took out the stuff about the cheery, and the poetic crap, and the god stuff, and the (poor) tear jerking imagery and....well, most of the crap you did and replaced it with ninjas!
besides that missing, I'm sure if it was there it would have had a lot more depth. I'm the kind of viewer that needs music, or at least words. It captures my imagination. And for me to realize that and let the creators of movies know that, is an important tool. Great movie.
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
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