It's ok but it needs sound.
Duwa Ho! Your Animation is great, considering it's your first attempt to create a flash movie. It really needs sound (it's the same comment that I recieve). Since your freaky poem is so hard to understand I'll give you a 10 for it.
Very open minded I am.
Well seems to me that girl wishes that the world she dreams of a peaceful world I wish that can be true as well but when you character was a little sad that she said she was the sin that she was or something like that made her trun back time or never come to the world. Damn that was great man hope you make a series.
It was Good.
very good graphics and ur drawing is sweet, but it IS boring. You can do a really nice looking Flash next time, make a flash that makes sense.
Overall, it was good.
sweet
sweet dude, work harder to get the effect that you want. for a first timer that was sweet! good luck on other flash projects...
beautiful
i really enjoyed the animation and the poem. i think that it would improve the cartoon much more if there was some light sad music in the background to enhance the mood. also the part when single words come up one by one i would speed that up just a little becuase there is a lil too much of a break between them.. which makes it seem to just lag on.
wonderful work!