An animation i made a while ago for a school project. A friend insisted i post it on the web so here it is. Feel free to leave feedback and comments as i am only starting with animations and maybe i'll make more(comedy or action) if you think i have what it takes:).
Enjoy and thanks for watching.
EDIT: Changed the voice, it should be better now. Thanks for your support it means alot to me :)
The not-so green future-It's a fact
This was awesome,a constant reminder how things easily get fucked-up by humans in theyr endless greed for resources and money,I sincerily digg this creation on yours but still,try redoing the audio that would be so sweet,nonetheless,ill give it 9/10 keep it up ur good :)
Pretty Interesting
This looks like a pretty interesting flash, but...I could swear you were speaking Italian. So, my advice is PLEASE remake this flash with subtitles and better narrative quality. Because I know it's worth the watch.
Great Job otherwise. Once you reupload it, please PM me so I can see it because I really want to know what was going on.
good and bad
The art and animation looked really good, but I could hardy understand a word of narration--the tone sounded so muted. A better microphone would really help. Or subtitles.
Awesome
But get a new mic or write subtitles
I loved the art
Your film looked fantastic, but I couldn't understand a single word of what you were saying, and it bums me out, because from the looks of the film your narration seemed really important. I think those last 20 seconds of just watching the trucks/bulldozers would have been a good place for credits