great
especial since you are only just starting
great
especial since you are only just starting
good movie
this was a decent flash. Unfortunately you need to work on the sound since it had a lot of background noise, else then that you did a good job
nice
pretty freeky thinking that that could actualy happen
Awesome
But get a new mic or write subtitles
Pretty Interesting
This looks like a pretty interesting flash, but...I could swear you were speaking Italian. So, my advice is PLEASE remake this flash with subtitles and better narrative quality. Because I know it's worth the watch.
Great Job otherwise. Once you reupload it, please PM me so I can see it because I really want to know what was going on.