naisu plot lol o-o

(i also appreciate that you put bleach op in this)
naisu masterpiece from 2010

Not bad, but could be improved

Well, I think I'm not gonna say anything you have not read before. ^^U

You should have elaborated this a bit more. Background, music (a loop would be fine, because it stops after some time), text (as some people have said to you: it is occasionally hard to read), animations (or at least some changes in the image, depending on the thing you are saying)...

In short, a bit of customization and not just a static image and plain text. Also, there are some typos over there and a little lack of information (for example, neko characters are just humanoids with some feline characteristics as neko = cat, not any animal - that is kemonomimi, wich also includes neko characters, of course).

I see this more like a blog entry than an informative flash... Very, very simple. But, hey! I think this could be a great idea to support and advise all those people who don't know about manga or anime!

Just keep it up and improve your flash and drawing skills! I hope to see more of your work in the future! :D

Good luck!

nice

informative, but the text is occasionally hard to read. i think it's a nice way to introduce people into the world of anime and manga.

ALOT IS NOT A WORD

A fair amount of the words are difficult to read because of the black font being invisible in the thick black lines of the drawing.
The font should be separate, and I would suggest having different anime pictures appearing on the bottom to correlate with the text above.
You have a lot of knowledge and are very informative, it's good to share. But you need more then good knowledge to spread the word, you have to make it interesting, and easy to read. A static picture that hides some of your letters and words just isn't going to cut it.
Also, every time you say "alot" baby Jesus cries, because I punch him.

Indeed...

It was very informative but the text was kinda hard to read. Try to work on that in further submissions!