naisu plot lol o-o
(i also appreciate that you put bleach op in this)
naisu masterpiece from 2010
Reviews for "Anime Tutor 1"
nice
informative, but the text is occasionally hard to read. i think it's a nice way to introduce people into the world of anime and manga.
Left4DeathInFire responds:
Thank You, I appreciate your review.
Nothing's perfect, but...
Ok
Your movie has several good points: the music is good and not too loud, wich make the reading easier. The information in the texte are correct and the way you bring them ( making like if it was the guy that was telling it all) is interesting.
BUT ( because there's always one) it's static. There's nothing movieng, nothing to catch the attention of the viers. You need too had, you know, this little animated detail that catch the eye and had life to your movie (blinking eye, moving clouds, floatting hair...). Also, the texte is hard to read: it's small, compact and (sometimes) black on black. You got to take care of this. The simplest solution would be to had a box at the bottom of your screen to write the texte. You can give it any style you want to ( robotic, romantic, comic). Or you can write it in a manga style bubble, to support you subject.
Last thing, when you had your song to your project, go in its properties and scroll the box where it's written "repeat". Select "Loop" and your song will play in loop during all the time the viewer will be, well, viewing.
Good luck.
Indeed...
It was very informative but the text was kinda hard to read. Try to work on that in further submissions!
Left4DeathInFire responds:
Thanks, I will work harder on the next one.
ALOT IS NOT A WORD
A fair amount of the words are difficult to read because of the black font being invisible in the thick black lines of the drawing.
The font should be separate, and I would suggest having different anime pictures appearing on the bottom to correlate with the text above.
You have a lot of knowledge and are very informative, it's good to share. But you need more then good knowledge to spread the word, you have to make it interesting, and easy to read. A static picture that hides some of your letters and words just isn't going to cut it.
Also, every time you say "alot" baby Jesus cries, because I punch him.
Left4DeathInFire responds:
Thanks for the info, I know about the words that collide with the pic. Sorry about the alot problem. Just don't punch jesus anymore. (Wait... I am an atheist, what do I care?)