i've been working on this for 2 days and its not to good if i get a good score ill try and make better ones.
Remember it is ClockDay2009.
ps. oh and the ziki zaki boom thing is from the zikizakiboom cartoons but i cant find them anymore and and i cant find the authors name.
pss. i made the tank in the pre-loader
ZikiZaki review fight
I have almost no idea what just happened. A guy got hit in the head and a bunch of text flew by and that was it. There's nothing really to say about this Flash except improve everything, add some sound, etc. The pre-loader wasn't bad, though.
1/10
~ Z
REVIEW REQUEST CLUB
Too fast
Can't say much about this flash as it went by in a flash (pun intended). Turn down the FPS or make use of a "next" button, so we could actually read the text and see what's going on there.
Or strech out the scenes on more frames and not just one.
From what I could make out, the graphics are below average (just sticks, no backgrounds) and animtations aren't good either. Try to work on your drawing skills because stick men are overused and you need to come up with an awesome stick movie if you want to impress people with it.
Also work on your animation skills. Tweens should only be used very carefully, it just looks unnatural if peoples arms and bodys tween around the screen.
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Not much to say, really
The filesize of this movie says it all, really. I have text documents on my computer that are larger and better quality than this piece.
There is little animation to speak of and no plot seemed evident - it's really difficult to get into some sort of plot in a flash that short.
You need to work on your animation skills, giving them a chance to actually be seen, so move the arms and legs of the characters, possibly taking some inspiration from such good stick fight movies as Xiao Xiao, where the characters run around and do crazy flips etc, combined with some spectacular moves.
A music track could help, along with the inception of perhaps a voice or two, for these characters, but maybe that is getting a little ahead of us.
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Im doing this alone and this is my first flash i just learned how to slow it down and how to put music i cant get voices on and i added words last so i didnt know if you could see them or not.
Thank B for Clock Day.
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Score: 0 / 10
Summary: Thank B for Clock Day.
Review: This is not good enough. At all. Had it not been for clock day, this wouldn't have passed.
It's hard to review, as everything went so fast. Slow it down! As far as I can tell, the stickmen were simple, and the animations were horrible.
You should try to make it longer, add more frames, slow it down, draw something better, and animate it. use tweens if you have to, but preferable, fbf.
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to fast
~ Animation/Graphics ~
Sticks are not really top notch and even clocks would be better
1/10
~ Story/Content ~
make the frames longer or make the frame rate slower cause i could not see anything
0/10
~ Audio ~
no audio at all but that was probebley for the better
~ Overall ~
this would not pass if not for clock day
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